The first story we completed was 40 pages long. We were proud of this sucker and wrapped it in hand-drawn 40 grit sandpaper covers. Nobody seemed to like it, since the books would instantly scratch the hell out of any other book it came in contact with . . . or maybe it was all the masturbation. We don't know.
Below is the much shorter second story. I actually penciled it and then inked it. We were planning a series of these shorter caveman kid stories, but soon got distracted by our 600 page graphic novel, Moses.
Jeff recently cleaned it up and I redrew a bit. It is still very rough, but we think it has a lot of heart.
Thanks for looking
Dean
